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April Story & Poem Entries --
Note: Winning stories and poems will be published in Pony Pals Magazine. All entries must be original, meaning that the member who enters them must have written the text. To be eligible the story or poem must have a horse or pony in it someplace. All entries published in the Magazine will earn 500 Wiggins Bucks, the best stories and poems will earn 3000 Wiggins bucks and trophy for the writer.April Story & Poem Entries --
Note: Winning stories and poems will be published in Pony Pals Magazine. All entries must be original, meaning that the member who enters them must have written the text. To be eligible the story or poem must have a horse or pony in it someplace. All entries published in the Magazine will earn 500 Wiggins Bucks, the best stories and poems will earn 3000 Wiggins bucks and trophy for the writer. | Jane Crandal & JB | 2015-09-16 21:53:00 | | Name: Scarred
By: theZoekid :) (I'm back baby!)
I was only a three but I am my owners horse. I watched from the stables everything that my poor owner went through, and this is how it went:
Fear covered her eyes, evil seemed to choke her to her death, darkness was shadowing overhead, hope seemed to hide from her, love was afraid to love her, grace seemed to be a gift to her, but she left it unopened. She was alone . . . Alone without hope, love, or grace. There was no hope for a sinner like her, right? After you sin, you feel trapped in your sin, thinking “their is no hope for a sinner like me,†and after you convince yourself that there is no way he could forgive you. You just keep doing the evil, corrupted sin. She was lost, what can she do to be free of this hatred and this evil that has choked her from the inside out! Was there hope to forgive her? Was there love waiting for her? Was the gift of grace meant to be free? Was she, meant to be free?
| thezoekid & Star Gaze | 2014-04-01 22:56:21 | | My Horse and Me
by countrygirl22
I had just cleared a jump on my horse, Razen. A bay quarter horse who could do almost anything. I noticed some girls had been watching me jump my course, and they didn't look happy, I was so busy looking at them that I didn't realize that there was one more jump. Razen only jumps if he feels that we're both ready, and I wasn't ready. I noticed the stone wall at the last second, and it was too late. Razen slid to a halt and then turned when we reached the jump. My helmet broke and my head banged into the wall.
I woke up in the hospital, and I thought back to my fall. I saw my mom and dad sitting down in the same room. The walked over to me.
"Sweet heart what happened?" Said my mom.
"I uhhh..." Then my mind was blank. I couldn't remember anything, I couldn't even remember who I was.
"Hanna?" Said Mom.
"I have a question." I said.
"Alright." Said Mom.
"Who are you?" I said. My mom knew right away what had happened and she started crying. I went back to sleep. I woke up at the stable.
"Does this bring back any of your memory Hanna?" Asked Mom. But it didn't.
"No, it doesn't." I replied. My mom frowned, and she took me to the stable everyday. One day, when I had learned plenty, she let me go on my own. When I got there, everything came back to me. I remembered Razen, so I went up to him and hugged him. I remembered my fall, but I didn't remember losing my memory. I rode Razen back to my house. When my mom realized that my memory was back, there was lots and lots of hugging. To this day, I think about how there is a special bond between "my horse and me".
| countrygirl22 & razen | 2014-04-03 02:18:26 | | My Special Savannah. Part 1.
By:madimsmall
I was running out of our old but beautiful house. It kind of looked new to others, but i think it looks pretty old to me. " Hey Astrid, whats the hurry?" my Mom said. " Well, i need to see the new horse in the barn. Is Dad in there?"I asked. " I think so." replied Mom. Our family has always had this country voice in us. "Hi dad, can i see the new horse?"I asked. " Well, its not really a horse."My Dad replied. " What do you mean?"I asked. When my Dad brought it out i realized it was a black dappled pony. Well a 14.6 handed pony. " She is for you, I was wanting to suprise you, but you asked to soon." said Dad. I was not expecting a pony for my first horse. " Thanks." I said. I did not know what else to say. " I found her at the fair yesterday." said Dad.
When my dad handed the lead rope to me she sniffed me all over.
"Hmm." I muttered," What should i name you?" i said aloud. " Got it!" I said. " Savannah." I said proudly. I took her to her stall and groomed her on the crossties and saddled her up. She looks good in pink. I took her out to the arena and started walking around. " I hope this turns out good." I muttered. Once i troted and cantered her around each directon, my mom came out and started my jumping lesson. I already new how to jump 3ft because, i started jumping when i was 9. " Now sweetie, lets jump this course." my mom shouted across the arena. After my lesson i loved Savannah with all my heart. I knew she would have a amazing future. | madimsmall & Bruno | 2014-04-03 20:23:15 | | The Special Pony ( poem)
By: madimsmall
There once was a black pony running across a field.
When it saw me it came and kneeled.
I reached out my hand, so she could sniff me.
She was a gentle pony, as sweet as could be.
| madimsmall & Bruno | 2014-04-03 20:23:15 | | A true gift Chapter 2
By: Varonnica
When I started to suckle it felt a little weird. I stopped, Then I couldn't resist the warm rich tasting milk. My mom looked at me, She licked me again. I thought I was clean from that white-clear slimy stuff. But instead it felt like a kiss. When she stopped drinking the clear stuff, She lied right back down. I wanted to lie down with her but the sound of adventure was calling. My mother's ears perked up. So I did the same. She stood up and looked out the square like window of the stalls. I heard foot steps. I wanted to look out the window to but I was small and again, My mother was in the way. A human aproched us. "Gasp, DAD QUEENIE HAD HER FOAL! He came rushing in which scared me and I hid behind my bulky stalky mother. "Oh she did, Well we need to call the Vetrnarian to remove the afterbirth and see if all the horses are healthy".
When they left, I walked in front of my mom. She looked at me. I looked at her, I was scared. I didn't know what the vet would do. She told me, "The vet is going to be here to give you some shots and me, Vacsences". The girl approached us again. And led my mom to the pasture. I got scared again. She left me! "Well come on, If you don't you wont see your mother". My ears perked up and I followed the sent of her. I found her rolling in the grass and having fun. She was acting like a foal with all that playing and bucking and rolling. I want to be just like her I said to myself. I ran to her and did agsactly what she did.
Vote to hear part 3!!! I know their short but I want it to involve mystery! ;D | Varonnica & Vizeryn | 2014-04-03 23:16:45 | | The very truly good dream by CoolHorseRider7891 I hold the rubber reins as he leads the way over the jump, my fist in the sky, my legs feeling numb with tension. The crowd gasps. Oh, how it feels great to jump! Over the fence, over the wall, I feel free! But as I hear the sound of my alarm clock, I know that it was a dream. A very, truly good dream. | CoolHorseRider7891 & Warrior of the West | 2014-04-06 03:38:25 | | Fiery Fiona
BY: Veronica
Introduction: Meet the beautiful and heroic Fiona-the mare with the glowing red mane-as she helps a girl discover that thing aren't always what they seem.
Chapter 1
And then the fiery red mare, Fiona, galloped off through the forest, her silky mane and tail streaming behind her like flames in the wind. Twelve year old Astrid Sundlo closed her eyes, imagining the scene just as she pictured it so many time before. "The brave girl with the blond braids sat astride the horses glossy back, riding naturally as if she'd been born there. Finally, the glorious fire horse left the forest and galloped right in the castle courtyard. Cheering filled the air as the citizen's of the land gathered to honor the courage of the pair in saving the Rose Dragon's from drowning and returning them safety to their home.
Is that finally the end?" Astrid's younger brother complained. "Because I'm tired of hearing about Fiona". I want another story about the Nix.
Astrid's eyes flew open. The cheers of the adoring crowd faded. She found herself once more where she always was-- in Canter Hollow, The small sleepy village in the shadow of Rolandsgaard Castle at the Trails End, The encient estate that lay at the center of the land of North of North.
----TO BE CONTINUED----Vote to hear the rest of the chapter and maybe, Even another chapter! ;D | Varonnica & Vizeryn | 2014-04-06 03:38:25 | | TITLE: A young Fighter part 1
BY: Varonnica
After her mother fighting Breast Cancer, young Sadie White was devastated after nearly losing her mom and her Race horse, Dark Revenge, died from cancer as well. Sadie's mom, Astrid, was devastated as well after losing her championship winning race horse and was determined to get another one. Astrid and Sadie got their coats and left to get a young horse and raise it to be a champion. They arrive to the HRC, Horse Rescue Center. "Mom I don't know which one to get". Don't worry Sadie you will". Their was the most beautiful blackest horse. I got close and looked at him to see how tall he was and to see if he was a stud. My mom then got close. He reared and nearly put her In the hospital, again. "SADIE"! Get back over here that horse has gone mad! "No mom he just spooked", I got even closer and he didn't react. Mom I want this one. "Sigh but he's dangerous and he looks old". His chart says he's a yearling and he was treated bad so I except that he's being mean just look at all the scares on him". "Okay fine load him up and I'll pay". YAY thank you mom thank you! We go back home.
He slowly gets out of the trailer and I put him in the paddock. I give him hay, grain, oats and water. I grab a halter and some treats. I open then close the gate behind me. "Hi boy I'm here to train you and, if you listen I will give you some treats"! I approach him slowly and he stood their. I undo the halter and slip it on him. "You know, I haven't named you, hmm... How about, Gasp I got it, Shadow. Your new name is shadow. He nudged my shoulder. "Oh I guess you want a treat, huh boy? I gave him a carrot. He shook his long mane and looked at the sky. I felt a drop. Then another then another then another. "Sadie come inside and eat your dinner its getting cold"! I loaded him in a nice cozy stall and walked away. MMM Burgers my favorite! "I know mine to, so what did you name him? Shadow. I replied. I finished and brushed my teeth and went to bed. | Varonnica & Vizeryn | 2014-04-08 03:45:10 | | TITLE: Fiona's Adventure part 1
By: Varonnica
All I seen was blur, and a faded figure of my Mother, Bella. Her beautiful white blaze on her shining simmering black coat. I could barely see that she was not on her feet yet. My eyes widened with excitement of her telling me she was going to get up soon. "I couldn't wait In-tell she got up, because I could smell the rich milk coming from underneath her black and pinkish belly. She rose up and stood their for a minute or to. Then she started licking the slimy white stuff off me."
I wanted to get up but I couldn't feel my long legs. I tried and tried but couldn't get up. "Come on Fiona, You need to get up and get used to your legs. By a hour or two, You will need to run with me and be accepted by the great and mighty, Bello". "I want to mom, I do really". "Well this reminds me- "Bella, is she ready"? A deep voice said. "Yes Bello". My mother replied. "Because if she isn't, we will leave without you guys". "Yes sir I'm ready, I stood up, See"?! He snorted and walked away. "He's rude". "Fiona don't talk like that, he's your father". "Wait what, how does that work"? I'll tell you later your to young". Now lets go and extra-size those beautiful black legs". "Okay herd, move out to North of North". Bello said. And my adventure begun. | Varonnica & Vizeryn | 2014-04-10 01:29:41 | |
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