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March 2014 Story Contest Age 12 & Older To be eligible for voting your story must have a horse or pony in it somewhere. Start your entry like this TITLE By USERNAME

You can vote for your favorite once a day	Jane Crandal & JB
2014-03-03 03:50:15
TITLE: The mystery of Greendale Road By: Varonnica I have always wondered what that beautiful wild horse was doing on that road I said to my mom. I don't know either honey now eat your Bregfeast. Okay I said, droopy. Then I sarred out the window to Greendale road. Morning everyone said my older brother. He sat down and ate his bregfeast fast then went back to bed. It was summer-break and its 104 days long. I went to my bedroom and stared brushing my thick brown curls. I got dressed and went outside where Prince was standing their almost like waiting for me. Out of the cornor of my eye I seen that beautiful horse. I got on Prince's back without a saddle and rode after it. When the horse seanced our presence he started galloping really fast. He was so far away that Prince and I just gave up. I sat down by a BBQ sitting and brag out my matches and hot dogs. And started eating. We went back home and ate dinner then went to sleep. When I woke up I seen Prince and the Wild horse together in the pen when he senced me he jumped the fence and ran. I was not dressed all the way but still ran and hopped on Prince and went after that myserous horse. I had my laso. The horse was stuck by a vine growing from the Greendale forest. I got off and approsed it. Out of nowhere He sprouted out a horn and zapped the vine off and took off. I had a open mouth and was mubbling. One year later... I was 16 and Prince was still there. I rode in Greendale to streach out Princes legs and walking tores us was the wild horse and a foal. I gasped I thought that she was a he! I got off slowly and she didn't mind at all. I petted it and out of the sky was a mass sucking up the foal and he's mother then boom! They were gone. And for that day on, I have always woundered, what was the mystery of Greendale road?	Varonnica & Vizeryn
2014-03-11 01:50:55
Title: Love Story part 1 By: Horsesforever12 Introduction: Do you love romantic novels? Fairy tales? I have a story to tell that has to do with love, friendship, and unity. So let me begin. Chapter 1: One Spring Morn Everything was blurry. I could see the faded figure of my mother. I blinked. The first thing I saw was a pretty-faced bay with long lashes and a diamond running down her head to meet her nose. She was so beautiful. Everyday I wish I looked as pretty as she did. She licked me dry. Her warm tongue. I tried to stand up, but my long legs felt like jelly. I tried again and again and finally found my footing. I went over to my mother, who was standing herself now, and began to suckle on her. She bent her head around and looked at me before going to her hay. After I had nursed, I flopped down and sighed. It was then that I looked up and saw three large strangers standing around my stall. One was tall and bald, the other was kind-looking with bright red hair, and the last was a little one. She had red hair too that was a little messy. They all smiled down at me and made little oohs and ahhs once and a while. "A filly! A filly papa. Just what I wanted." the little one said excitedly. I watched them with my big amber eyes and listened intently. "I know," said the big one. "What are ya' gonna call her?" "Love Story." said the little one. "Why that?" asked the papa. "Because of the little heart on her head. And she was born on the first day of spring. It sounds like a love story to me, dada. A love story between me and my little chestnut filly." the girl replied. "You are quiet the thinker," the papa told, rubbing the girl on the head. She smiled. My eyes started to get heavy. Before I closed them, I looked at the girl. There was something special about her. Then I closed my eyes as the sun rose into the sky and spread her light across the heavens. Vote for this to hear part 2! :)	Horsesforever12 & Jedi
2014-03-12 19:42:59
The Lonely Road By: Haily Horse Prologue There's a little legend of a road that had never been ridden on. So what was the point in making it, anyways? Here, let me tell you about it and I'm sure you'll understand it just as I do. This road was all ready and prepared to go for both ponies and horses with their riders to roam on as some kind of meeting place as well. But the before the road would open, a ghostly event occurred. Workers had caught a glimpse of a white horse with a thin stream of blood running from its nostril. Naturally, the construction workers were absolutely terrified and called off the opening and left the road alone. Every time somebody had tried to ride on the road, a drastic accident would strike, and both horse and rider would join whatever was haunting that road. The road was untouchable and dangerous to all. That is, until that cure came along. The cure was a prophecy. Since the word 'prophecy' makes something sound ancient, I decided to change it to 'cure'. Anyways, this cure said that one person would come along and try to ride the lonely road again. The phantom horse and rider that have been haunting this area will come to her and try to take this person. But she will stop them with her calm and soothing voice. This young girl will bring an end to all of this chaos at the road. I am the cure. And this is my story. Vote for this for Chapter One :)	haily horse & Beauty
2014-03-26 21:36:31
The road to recovery. Writerandrider. I gazed near the white pickety fence next to Fearless and Rose. My black tail swishing in the summer brezze. The cool air was a gift to us from the long endless humdity. I turned my head to the sound of a car pulling up the dirt road of the queit little farm. A red barn housed us and the other farm animals. A small pond was home to the ducks and a dog house for the old basset hound. I'm boring you arn't I? Well I lei about what I just said. I don't live on a cozy farm. Where I live is not all happiness. I live in a Slaughter Farm. Yeah I'm just buying times till I die. They say accept your fate but I can't I WON'T. I now three years old. The runt of the litter. In a family of Throughbreds. Everyday is a slow wait till death. "Hey Thunder." Fearless said. I turned my head to the old grey Arabrian. "Yes?" "I have a plan to exscape." "What?" I moved closer to him. "You heard me." "How do we do it?" "Rose is gonna help us." "When do we do it?" "Tonight at midnight." I can't belive I'm leaving this place little did I now what would happen to me.	horsewrite & Snow
2014-03-31 20:11:51