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February Story Contest Age 11 & Under To be eligible for voting your story must have a horse or pony in it somewhere. Start your entry like this TITLE By USERNAME

You can vote for your favorite once a day	Jane Crandal & JB
2014-01-30 21:53:01
The Jumping Contest By madimsmall The sun awoke and i did too i then realized today is the jumping contest! And i knew it was going to be hard with a horse like Bruno. I ran into the stable and too Bruno's stall he was standing in it and looked ready for the contest. I got him out and put him on crossties and started grooming him. I wanted him to look him his best. After a hour of grooming i went to go get my tack. i got the blanket, saddle and girth on him and some how got the bit and bridle on his head. i hoped on him and walked out to our arena. i saw my trainer Amy teaching a rider on a little pony. i started trotting around and Bruno was more smooth than normal! I knew he was ready the the contest. Chapter 2 getting too the show After loading Bruno in the trailer we drove off to the jumping contest. When we got there i walked Bruno around so he can get used to the place. I walked Bruno to his stable and let him eat. I ran to get my number (1185) and i put on my clothes and polished my tack and my boots and ran to Bruno. I put him on crossties and groomed him some more. I put the tack on him and hoped on him and walked out. All of the sudden i saw a horse rear. The horse was a beauty and was very strong and had the hindquarters of a jumper i new he was going to be our biggest competition. But i know Bruno could beat him. chapter3 show time After the girl and the strong horse finished their round it was me and Bruno's turn we cleared the first jump and the second and the rest! And our points were bigger than the others! We won!! And i knew Bruno could do it. And the course was hard! When i got handed my big blue ribbion i put it on Bruno's bridle and gave him a pat on the soulder. "Extra oats for you tonight!"	madimsmall & Bruno
2014-02-02 13:49:36
A True Desire by: Jannah Rose Natasha sat at her desk she had just finished her homework she now was sketching a race horse the horse that her father promised would be hers her father was dead now he died in a plane crash now her mother owned all of the horses that were her father's she wondered why her mother wouldn't let her get envolved with the horses the horse that was promised to her was named Black As Sin but the horse was called Sam Sam was a 2year old thoroughbred stallion her father had owned him since he was a new born the colt's parents were Red fish and Golden Arrow both of his parents were champion race horses he just had to live up to them... Natasha desired to get up on his back feel the reins in her hands feel the wind blowing she wanted to hear Sam's hoofbeats she wanted to hear the crowd cheering their names she wanted to cross the finish line with a smile that was all just a dream she wondered why her mother wouldn't let her get envolved with the horses maybe it would remind her of dad if she came and saw the horses it would remind her of the time when dad was alive she knew that was it she could hear the door opening Natasha's hazel eyes glimmered as she thought who it could be she thought it was her mother she rushed down the steps her short brown hair bounced as she hurried down "food is here" her mother said she was carrying large brown paper bags filled with chinese food "how was school" her mother asked as she set down the food "it was okay" Natasha replied "what made it just okay" her mother said as she began to get plates down "you know how 8th grade is it's not all that glamorous" Natasha said as she sat down "I know" said her mother her mother got out Natasha's favorite seasame chicken she passed the container to Natasha "thanks" she said as she got a fork Natasha opened the container she set her fork down as she waited for her mother her mother got shrimp fried rice they prayed to God then they began to eat "mom I have a question" "what is it" her mother asked "why don't you let me get envolved with the horses" Natasha asked her mother paused she set her fork down and glared at Natasha "well-um sweety it-it I can't really explain" Natasha sighed sadly "I just want to be envolved I just want to see Sam he was promised to me mom!" "I know I know maybe this weekend" Natasha's eyes lit up she stopped eating and hugged her mother "that's all I really want" her mother smiled TO BE CONTINUED	jannah rose & The Fault In Our Stars
2014-02-03 22:03:15
If you entered on February 13 or 14 and your story is not here, please enter it again.	msjane & AE
2014-02-15 18:22:27
The best birthday ever by:Varonnica April 11th 2015 a 11 year old horse/rabbit lover was turning 11 in a week or so. She was always on the computer searching for gifts. But then she seen it, A black and white stud with a beautiful reputation and fine blood lines with all the mares he bred with. He cost 600,000$! of corce her mom and dad was filthy rich but not that rich. She rote it down on a sticky note on the refriderater. With all of the other gifts that she really wanted last B-Day. Her mom and dad got home from the bank. She shouted out to them, THIS HORSE ON THE INTERNET IS LOADED! PLEASE PLEASE BUY HIM FOR ME! Well that depends, her mother said. How much does he cost? Umm umm your gonna laugh. 600,000$!!! Yup. She replyed anxtously. We don't have that money. Said dad going through the bills. But we're rich, that cant be. Oh it is, mom replyed. But- no buts now go to your room while we go through the bills and bday list. UUUUGHHHHHHHHH!!! -Slam-. Im going to get that horse if its the last thing I do. She started packing outfits and shoes and some snacks. BUT... she needed a place for the stud and how is she going to get to one part of Montana to the other? "That's over 1200 miles" she said to her self. And whats the plan? I KNOW! Im going to say to my mom an dad that im going to go to my friends house for a sleep over for the weekend. She packed some more. She knew a guy near by that owns a stable. She rode her bike over there on the dirt road. And nearly broke her neck doing a wheely. Luckly he was outside, she knew that he was not the nicest person in the world. Mr. Harshmen- heck even the name was mean-! Yes? Who are you get off my property! Wait! He turned around. What?! Ill pay you if you let me bourd a horse here. How much? He said in a deep voice. 1000$. SOLD! Okay but it might be late- I don't care pay me now! Okay okay! He graped the money with he's sweaty palms. She rode off and search for the rale road tracks for the train. The train always comes at 4:00 -that's when she left when she told her mom' bout the Sleep over-. She seen the train coming she through the 10lbs bike in a empty slot in the train. She quickly grabed the mini latter handle and fell on the bike. There was hay being delivered to Crystal Creek Farms the farm that owned the horse. She built a little bed out of the hay and dragged the bike over on the side of the hay and lied down. Opening her back-pack she put a bandad on her finger. And started eating a bag of carrots that she snuck out of the house. There was 7 in the bag and 5 were left but she didn't worry their was LOTS of fruit in there. She closed her eyes. But couldn't sleep, the wolves where howling and the train bar was dangerously close to the ground anough where even at least one wolf can catch a ride. The morning of April 8th her destination was here. Right in front of her was Crystal Creek Farms. She grabed every thing and darted off into the field. He was right there. But the stable hand was near by. She could hear him whisling. But it shouldn't take that long at the back of the stall was a door and sitting on the water barrles was the stable hand. ZZZ... he had his hat over his eyes. A perfuct cover. She took a rope and led him out and got on his back. And a merical happened. A trailer was going to a produse market near the house was taking off in a few minutes. The guy was getting in the truck. In the nick of time she got in with the stud. On the bridle was a piece of lined gold with a name. The words said, Prince. Madalynn was stuned! That was her favoret male horse name. On the morning of April 11th, she was at the stable putting in Prince in a clean stall. And she ran home sence her bike tier was flat. But Mr. Harshmen got paided to fix it anyway. She got home covered in hay mud and a little bit of minure. Her mom asked for her to get in the shower. But before that they said well the male that you where looking at was already taken. She fround. By us! But how? Well we did not know you where talking' bout that horse. We had him over there for a while. Well about that I- kidnaped him, we know. How? Im your mother, I know what your doing all the time. He's over at- Ben's stable. Okay you need to stop your frecking me out. Well lets go vist him. Oh yeah, they both said together, Happy BirthDay sweetie. BEST BIRTH DAY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the end	Varonnica & Vizeryn
2014-02-16 20:30:10
I've just turned 11, so im eligible, right? :D TITLE Adventures with my pony By USERNAME haileyluv2003 I was in the paddock, attempting to calm my mare. Oh, excuse me! My name is Hailey, and I'm 11. I own a mare called Rose, she's an andalusian. So.. Rose was rearing up, and she hit me, hard, with her hoof "Hey! NAUGHTY GIRL!!" I scream. I sighed and led her back to the barn, using much force. I put her back in the stall, and went to the stall 4 over from Rose's. "Hello Commanche!" I smiled and looked at the arabian, stroking his snout. 'You feeling good today boy?" I asked, and held out a carrot. Commanche took it, and whinnied loudly. 'Great!' I said, slipping his blue halter on. I quickly ran to the tackroom, and picked up my saddle, blanket, and reins. I ran back to Commanche's stall and put the blanket on, and then the saddle, and then the reins. I slip my riding helmet on and put one foot in the stirrup and swing my self into the saddle. "Yah boy!" I yank the reins, and he runs. I make a special 'click' sound with my teeth, causing him to run faster. I grin, and we run out to the jump course. My instructor, Eve, began to scold me. "Look at you! You aren't posting, and your posture is horrible!" I sigh. Eve is always difficult like this. I turn to face the jump, and command my horse to canter. I began to post, and leaned foward with my hands on Commanche's neck. That is called the 2 point. A friend rushed into the ring "SLOW DOWN! PULL HIM UP!" I gasped, as I crashed into a jump. That's all I remembered. The End :D Is it good enough? to be continued :)	haileyluv2003 & Nezi
2014-02-17 01:13:27
Dreams By SkyRiderz I urged Thunder on, he was galloping full pelt now. His distinct hoof beat's pounded in my ears and his nostrils quivered. "That's it Thunder! Go on!" I cried, encouraging him on. Thunder was a BIG horse, and his shimmering coat was a fine bay. His long dark silky mane tickled my hands, but I didn't mind one single bit. We were in a meadow, a meadow filled with bright wild flowers and lush long green grass. The sun was bright and warm, the sky clear and a divine blue. Suddenly, I felt a cold drop of water dampen my hand. Another, then another. I glared up, it was raining. This wasn't right. I felt the rubber reins slip from my grip and be replaced by a wooden pole. I felt thunders great majestic head vanish and turn into the end of a prickly broom. This wasn't a gorgeous meadow. This was my back garden, it was raining, and thunder was just a broom, a figure of my imagination. Sometimes I let dreams get the better of me, But Ill still keep dreaming, even though perhaps a broom is as close as I'll get too a real life horse.	SkyRiderz & Pepper
2014-02-24 02:01:43