July 2013 Story Contest
Age 11
NOTE: To be eligible for voting your entry must have a horse or pony in it somewhere.
Jane Crandal & JB
2013-06-30 22:34:50
Robin Hood
By thezoekid
Chapter 1 Ruthless
“It was a long way back in history when your grate grandma was here name was Robin,†the father said as he sat on hes sons bed.
“Robin? That is a boys name dad, and my name,†the little boy said to his dad.
“Yes it is her mom and dad thought she was going to be a boy,†he answered.
“Oh,†the boy said.
“Robin, can I finish?†he ask him.
“Yes dad sorry,†he said back.
“Its okay. Anyways your grandma's mom and dad did not like her, so to prove that she was better then a boy she started hunting, fishing, and riding. Now this was a long time ago so girls were not aloud to hunt or ride sidesaddle and not ware a dress. She did everything that they did not want girls to do she put on boy clothes and looked like a boy. She was not ugly at all she just made herself look dirty and ugly. Well goodnig-,†he said.
“Dad?†he interrupted.
“Yes?†he asked
“Can you tell me more about grandma?†he asked.
“Well... Okay but don't tell your mother, and I won't tell her about you interrupting me,†he told him.
“Okay,â€he smiled.
“ROBIN!!†her mother yelled
“Yes mother,†Robin yelled back
“Get your chores done,†she said
“Okay mother,†she said back
She went to go get the bucket in the house when she over herd her mother talking to her father.
“Josh, when can we get rid of her?†Her mother ask her father
“Tomorrow Jan,†Josh answered.
“And that horses of hers?†Jan asked.
“Yes and that horse, we will have them both gone with the king tomorrow,†he laughed
“ What would the king use her for?†Jan asked Josh.
“Who cares as long as she and that horse is gone,†he laughed again but this with a pip in his mouth.
When Robin heard this she ran into the barn door up to her room. When she got up stairs she got her bag and her belongings. And then came down to get her horse she cut her beautiful long brown hair, and rode away...
Chapter 2 Outrages
She rode and rode away from that house away from her city to the kingdom.
She got there the next day. She tied her horse up to a post and walked around.
Then she saw a rich man bullying a little boy and girl.
“Stop! She yelled. Why are you hurting these children?†She asked the rich man.
“Me you talking to me? Well I caught them taking a peace of bread!†he answered
“A peace of breed? Are you really fighting with children about a peace of bread they are pour and hungering you are rich and fat! Do you really want a thief then I will be,†she answered as she garbed some bags of food and money from him and ran. She jumped on the back of her horse and ran away.
“Why... get that young man. He called me fat!!!!!†he yelled to the guards.
They were ran after her but they never got her she jumped off her horse and went in the house of the pour and gave them the money and food.
“Who shall we thank?†Ask one of the pour man in the house.
She went over to her horse and mounted and rode away.
For some time these story went around in the kingdom until one day when it finely got to the king.
“OUTRAGES!!†the king yelled as his messenger told him.
“Father, Father keep you crown on. I will find this boy and kill him.†he said.
The young prince left to the forest to get the boy or girl.
In the meantime Robin was getting some sleep in THE FOREST!!!!
“I found him... Her???†he ask himself as he look at her sleeping.
Chapter 3 Bad girl?
She awoke to him and his friends by her.
“Who are you,†she asked as she sat up.
“Who are we? Who are you?†he ask back.
“I am Robin. And you?†asked.
“I am Prince Micheal Hood, and this is Jo, Jason, Make, and and Sonny.†he answered.
“OH Prince?????â€she ask as she got up and picked up her stuff and backed up to her horse.
“Oh I am not going to hurt you I thought you were the guy I was looking for but I can see that your not no girl could do that.†he said laughing with hi friends.
“ No girl?†she asked now on her horse.
“Yes no girl,†he answered.
“ Well then this will be a shock to you... I am him! She said as her horse rode away. “Oh no shes getting away!!†they yelled as hey mounted their horses and went after her.
Chapter 4 INside the heart
He caught up to her and garbed her from the wast. And she fell on the ground she had on a dress now and was trying to run away in it. It did not work. The prince turn the horse around and garbed her again by the wast and let her hang there the way home to the plaice. When they got there they showed the king. The king was amazed and instead of killing her he hired her to help find rich people that are doing that and bring them to him. So she did...
One day she saw the same guy and went up to him and did the same thing but this time he got caught and she was aloud to give the pour all that he had. But she was taken away from the from the people by the prince Micheal Hood and he asked her to marry him and she said...
“YES!!!!â€She said as she hugged him.
“But I have to go. Go tell your father and I will help the pour.†she said
“Okay I love Robin.â€he said as she went into the house of the pour and they asked...
“Oh should we thank?†they asked.
She went over to her horse and mounted.
“Robin Hood!!!!†she said
The End
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