March Story Contest Age 11
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March Story Contest Age 11
admin & Aslan Equinox
2012-02-28 00:44:57
Shila and the Thief part 2
By Danielle Rose
A sharp whinny broke the stillness of the dark night and traveled through my window to my ears. I bolted out of bed to the window, and there, standing in the front yard, was a lathered, sweat bathed, heaving Maybelle.
"Mom! Dad!"I cried out as I pulled on my pants over my nightgown. "Maybelle's in the front yard!"
I quickly dashed out to the mare, tripping over my now falling-down pants, with my parents at my heels. We all noticed a few whip welt marks across
her back and the dried stained lather that covered her body.
Will send more later.
Danielle Rose & Dandy
2012-03-13 01:28:55
The Joy O' Spring Part 2
By Maid Mairain
I heard a truck pull up the driveway and then roar off. I was alone, and my one asset of escape was gone.
"She doesn't love you, She was just talking!" My neighbor went on, each word cutting like a knife. "I am Louise's horse! You're not! Don't you ever think you are! I hate you! I Hate you I hate you!" She reached her head over the wall and bit me -hard- in the shoulder. I jumped away, hoping there was no frightful horse on my other side. There wasn't. The stall to my right held no pony. It was empty. As empty as my heart.
So I was all alone except for this monster in the stall next to me, that I will not dare to call a pony, for it would be an insult to my race. My grain was on the wall separating me from the monster, so I dared not touch it. I nibbled the straw on the floor, but it was dry and tasteless. So I stood as far away from the monster as I could and I was glad when darkness fell, and I could envelope myself in the shadows of my stall. I was starving and had had no water for that too was by the monster. I stood alone in the corner for near three hours nursing the place where the monster had bit me. The blood trickled down my shoulder and would not stop. by morning I felt faint and awful, for I was starved and weak from staying awake. Around six in the morning Louise came and fed us. She was surprised to find none of my food eaten and told me to eat. I obeyed her, but the only reward I got was and sharp new bite on my other shoulder. I shied and Louise saw my other cut.
"Mesatarja! Mesa! Stop it right now! You leave Joy alone, DO YOU HEAR? LEAVE HER ALONE!!!" Louise hit Mesa hard on her nose. "I am APPALLED at you, Mesa! My own pony! If you dare to do THAT again I'll-- I'll have Mom sell you! She was right!" Louise was in tears now. " You are a no good pony! Your name fits you! You're mean! Your mean!" Louise put her head on my shoulder and sobbed.
When Louise had got a hold on herself, she took my lead rope, clipped it to my halter and led me to the Bathing House where there were cross ties and a hose and shelves to put the tack and grooming supplies on. She clipped me in, attended to my wounds and fed me a large breakfast. The she led me to my stall and nailed up some boards to keep Mesa away from me.
"I'll ride you tomorrow Joy, you're not in shape now. I'll let you to pasture with the other horses later, there are some you should like. Max and Jen are the leads, but they are pretty nice when you know them. There isn't too much grass, but there's plenty if everyone shares. I love you Joy, and I really REALLY wish you were mine." Louise kissed my swirly in the midst of my forehead and walked away.
At noon I was let out with the rest of the horses. There was almost no grass, but the horses were sharing and there did seem to be enough though it looked like none. I finally got up my guts and walked up to a horse.
"Can.... Can I eat some uh grass? Please?"
The paint mare looked me over suspiciously.
"You're the new horse, right?" The Mare asked "Did Jen say you could graze here?"
"Uh... No she didn't. I-I haven't talked to uh her. Do I uh have to?"
"If you want to eat anywhere you do. Now git! I'm trying to eat." The mare put her head back down and began to graze, completely ignoring me.
If I had been a little more dominant I might have started to eat right then and risk whatever may happen afterwards, but I was too scared to do that. So I went around, every time asking the same question "Can I eat here?" and always receiving the same answer "Did Jen say you can?" By three o clock I was hungry, so hungry I would have done anything to get some grass, so I finally walked slowly to where Max and Jen were standing. I kept my head down and my eyes on the ground so Jen would not think I was trying to intimidate her.
"Hey Genevieve. Look who's come to visit us. Hello there Miss, what do you want?" Max asked in his deep voice.
"I- My name is uh Joy and I'm... I'm Oh! I'm just so hungry and no one will let me eat any grass without permission and I was awake all last night licking the place where Mesa bit me and and I ate very little yesterday and I need permission to eat! Oh please let me eat! PLEASE!" I nickered pleadingly, hoping for a Yes, though expecting the worst.
"This isn't my line little Miss, ask Jen."
So I repeated my plea to Genevieve, and hoped.
But it was a vain hope, for Genevieve replied,
"And why would you want to eat? You're fat enough already, you dumpy little pony." And she turned her back on me.
To Be Continued.....
Maid Mairain & Dawn Rising
2012-03-13 15:47:35
RADICAL STORY OF EMMILLIA ROSALINA TOPINO part 1
By fluffy23
The dim, shallow light beamed on to Emmas pale white face. Emma without a doubt was looking into the judges eyes on the judging panel. Suddenly she started doing flips and an amazing split in the cold mid air.
Just then Emmas mum walked into her room and yelled Emmilia Rosalina Topino! Youre late for school, ohlala youre a mess. Only then Emma realised it was just a dream she was please and dissapointed at the same time. Mum, its just a little late, its alright! explained Emma as she brushed her golden blonde hair and tied it in a bun.
She went into the bathroom to brush her teeth and wash her face. She was dressed into a pink shirt and black shorts.
By then Emmas mum had gone down stairs to prepare breakfast for Emma.
At school, Whitney Sanders and Bellisia Redessialo (Emmas two best friends) walked into the history class where Emma was waiting. Hi Whitney, hi Belle whats going on? I thought you two were doing the same hair style as me! declared Emma as she had the look in her eyes which says ‘what is going on?! . Yeah not going to happen, we decided well youre too bossy. You want us to look like you and were not going to your friend or double copies of you! shouted Whitney across the room which made her perfect blonde straight hair which was tied in a bun, undid itself and send the hair tie across the room. Fine, I dont need you guys! yelled back Emma.
Just then Mrs Riley walked in with beaming eyes. Mrs Riley was in her lately 50s who wore glasses and had her brown hair tied in a bun. She was short and stubby though she wasnt that short . For those who love gymanastics. Heres an audition sheet or a sign up to be on a live show showing of your moves. If you would like to audition please raise your hand and come up here. Oh and the auditions are today, at 3.10 pm, so you could just go right after school. There are more information on the form at the board. As soon as Mrs Riley said it all, Emmas hand went straight up in the air and she ran up to the board.
After school, she re-did her hair into a bun and changed into black shorts and a pink singlet. She went straight into the audition room. She sat on a bench with two twins infront of her. They were wearing a blue gymanastic dress and their blonde hair tied in pigtails. Up for audition was a girl, just about her age, about 12 or 13. The girl had blonde hair with ash brown stripes. She had freckles and was wearing a blue singlet and a navy blue knee length leggings. After the twins had their turn. Emma walked up and when the judges said ‘go for it! She started with a doulble back flip and triple front flips. She did splits in the air and a amazing triple one hand cart wheel. She did some more and more till the horn beeped and everyone lined up straight, waiting for their name to be called out. Jessica Blossom(the first girl performing), Tellia and Chellia Raga(the twins) and the last person which is Emmilia Rosalina Topino. You guys are in live, welcome to D.E.S.M which stands for Dont Ever Stop Me. Welcome gals! shouted Jaz who was their trainer or atleast is going to be their trainer.
Mum, Mum, I got in! I got in! I got in to D.E.S.M, you know that hit TV show! I am so excited, oh my gosh!!! screamed Emma taking a deep breath at the end. Great Honey great, I have to take your brother Tommis to the doctor. He has to get his monthly shots. But I guess I can give you time, what is it? asked Emmas mum as she grabbed her black hand bag. Mum listen! I got in to D.E.S.M! yelled Emma now alittle angry with her mum and her seven year old brother.
Tommis had short brown hair just like his father. Tommiss real name was Tommissa Deo Topino. He always wore black jeans with a red top. Those were his favourie colour.
Oh my gosh honey! That is great! When do you start? Oh my goodness! Good going! shouted Emmas mum. Great! said Emma sarcastically.
She dropped her hot pink backpack on the couch and ran up to her room. She undo her hair and let the natural wavy hair down. After, she changed into a blue shirt and black baggy trouser. When it was seven to five, Emma went to the kitchen and made herself a cup of hot chocolate and a cheese sandwich as nobody was home just her.
She took it upstairs to her room and watched an another episode of ‘Dancing The Fancy. The host of the show asked the three finalist when was Jazz dancing found? When Emma yelled out come on! Even I know it! Ofcourse I know it! She did get bored so she changed the channel and watched ‘Fancy Nancy Mel. Move it Sel! Mel yelled to her best friend when Emma yelled for reality Boring! Emma did not find any show she wanted to watch so she just turned of her TV.
Hey! Maybe I could play dressup! said Emma as she put on her blue swim suit and tied her hair up. Then she changed her mind and took of the swim suit and just read a book called Picky Vicky which was about a girl named Vicky who was always picky about things. She always learn a lesson at the end.
Slowly she fell asleep.
It was a Saturday morning the next day so she packed her gear and went over to the gym.
Welcome to D.E.S.M! I am Melinda Berty and your host! Tonight there are some new dancers or as know as our gymanastic performer. said Melinda.
Hi Im Emmilia but everyone usually calls me Emma. Emma greeted. Hi, Im Jessica, call me Jess, I am part Spanish. Replied Jess. So am I! My mums Spanish but her dad was British so she has ash brown hair. added Emma with a smile. They both giggled and walked to the stage.
They started with a split then a flip. They started to twirl then swirl and a perfect cartwheel. Then the routine went on and one until the show was finish. Well back next week, so dont miss the show! said Melinda to the shiny black camera.
Im going to the Freezy Cone after want to join me? asked Jess with a big smile. Emma nodded and then they went to Freezy Cone the ice-cream shop.
Next day at school, Emma walked in with her hair let down, blue singlet and a black knee length leggings with blue shoes. She held her books in her hand and walked over to her locker.
Hey bestie, buddy or what ever you want to call it what are you doing today? asked Belle. What are you talking about? Were not.. replied Emma in startledness when the bell rung and they went to history class.
Morning class. I am Mrs. Pella the princible now, I am your relief teacher for today because your usual teacher is sick. Now, a new student is coming to this grade, her name is Jessica Blossom, I think Emma knows her from D.E.S.M. So you can take care of her. said Mrs. Pella as she handed Emma Jesss forms and let her sit next to Emma.
Recess has began, Whitney and Belle were fighting over the seat next to Emma but Emma just walked away and sat with Jess.
Hi, arent you sitting with your gang or friends or what ever you call them. asked Jess. Emma shook her head. They went over to the big tree and had a play.
Mum!Im home! said Emma as she headed over to the fridge. Let see, cookies, yes, gummy bears, yes, oh cream, totally yes. She started putting the cookies in the bottome, then the gummy bears then the cream. She dipped the big spoon in the bowl.
The next day, the teacher announced it was time for the big talent show. Emma usually did it with her crew but now she decided to do it with her new best friend, Jess. They practiced night and day and they had lots of sleepovers.
Girls, theres a big show at the 9th of May.I hope all of you can do it. said Jaz. But thats the day of the talent show, though Emma also whispering to Jess. Jess nodded, trying to agree with Emma. Emma loves the talent show but she wants to be at the big show too!
finds out what happens and what Emma's going to do in the next month!
fluffy23 & Moonlight
2012-03-19 13:11:40
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