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March Story Contest Age 10 & Under Enter your story below before March 30, 2012

March Story Contest Age 10 & Under



admin & Aslan Equinox
2012-02-28 00:44:43
that day by:twilit one day i went to someones house and rode horses and thats when i sall her a pretty buckskin mare she looked into my eyes and i looked into hers she held my gaze for minute and looked away i stood their that nite in my room wanting to go back to her but i could not and finally i saw her again.THE END.
twilit & Monty
2012-03-06 18:18:14
BRUMBIES IN THE MOUNTAINS

By - boon boon

Once upon a time there was a herd of horses galloping through the mountains free as the wind. The stallion was a dark black with 3 white socks and a smudge mark on his forehead! There were about 20 mares all with healthy and strong foals. The foals were mainly dark brown but 1 was a beautiful dark, dapple grey, colt who would one day own his own herd. I called him Gray-ster and everyday the stallion would go down to the house on the bottom of the gully because there was a beautiful blue roan mare who had a red roan filly foal at foot.
Then it all ended and I realised it was just a dream.

boon boon & cool
2012-03-08 02:26:22
My Ponies Adventures 2
By Kyileanna
Linsy and Chestnut
Age 8
In case you din't hear the first part of the story, Here I is.
Chapter 1 Linsy
It was a sunny day in Wiggins when I got Linsy, my pony. I didnt buy her. That is why she is very special. I was walking in the woods when I saw a fluffy, white tail. When I came closer to the tail, a beautiful white pony jumped out of the woods. A wild pony?? I thought. I gave the pony a carrot and when I continued the trail, I noticed that the pony had followed me. I tried to get her to stop, but she wouldnt so the pony followed me home. What will my parents say?? It was a miracle that my family agreed to take care of the pony! My sister was a little jealous that I got my own pony. That very night, my family took the pony to the Crandals. JC was very nice and was going to teach me and Linsy. She is always at the barn waiting for me with some treats and a ride. She is a very good girl and listens to my commands very quickly.

Chapter Lost

One month later, when I come in with hands full of treats, I dont hear her winning in the barn. I wish she was in her paddock.. But she wasnt. I found a broken piece of wood in her padlock. I was teaching her to jump. She jumped over the fence?? My friend Julie and I look all day. No, No, No. Linsy! We finally get tired and go home. I could hardly I at school I tell everyone. Katie said to meet her after school today. She said that her pony, Lily was taking care of Linsy! Nicole said she saw Linsy galloping in the town green. I thought, Why didnt I ask them? They are my friends and classmates!? That afternoon, I got my pony and fixed the broken padlock. I was glad to have Linsy back.

Chapter 3 Sleepover at the Barn
It was so cool! The barn, the animals and the secret passage. (I will tell you about that later) was so fun! Right now we were just chatting away in our sleeping bags. Later, we will go into the forest for a Midnight ride. I never went to a Midnight so I was pretty scared. But for now we were going to make a key-charm flashlight and a glow in the dark halter and lead rope. The directions were pretty easy for the halter, but not for the chain. I made a purple one for Linsy and a gold one for Chestnut. Ericka was going to ride Chestnut so I rode Linsy. The second we got in the padlock, I just screamed. Linsy was nowhere to be seen. So Ericka let me ride Chestnut, and she was going to ride Midnight, one of Lily Lemers ponies.

Chapter 4 Fun
The time we got back, we just ate a little snack, and Julie found a secret passage! It lead to a narrow tunnel, and then we climbed over an old ladder. By the time we got here, I almost forgot about Linsy. Then I saw a shadow witch looked like a ghost. Eeeck! I screamed. Ahhh!  Julie screamed. Annie and Ericka were laughing. Then were holding goast shaped papers in one hand and a flashlight in another.

Chapter 5 Escaping
(Linsys Story) I made it! I made it! I made the jump! It was a sunny day and
Kyileanna just gave me 10 horse cookies and gobbled it up. She also had made me a Glow-In-The-Dark Halter with a flash light for midnight rides. Talking about midnight rides, I knew I wouldnt go on that ride. I was going to escape. I was going back to Wiggins. I galloped, and galloped, and galloped and just stopped. It was almost 7:00 and was getting dark. I was also thirsty. I walked for a second and stopped. It was Badd Brook. That meant that I could drink and was getting closer to Wiggins. Then, a small dog was in front of me. Cody it said on the collar with bright blue letters. We soon became friends. We noticed that Olson Horse Farm was not far away. We trotted to the Barn quickly because we were HUNGERY. We begged for food (O.K., just Cody) nicely then gobbled up the hay and the mash and the dog food. He placed me in a stall. He placed Cody in a bag, and then put some blankets in there. Good Night, I neighed

Chapter 6 Back To the Barn
It was time-to go back with Cody. It was kind of sad. We walked down the spooky, dark forest even would out a light. The flash light. Kyileanna. I had to go back. I quickly put Cody on my back. I ran. And ran. I ran, ran, ran and ran. Families were the best thing you could have. Run, run, and run. I had to go back. I stopped. Something was running just like me! The thing was a horse. The horse had a halter. A glow in the dark one. A gold glow in the dark one. Just like Chestnuts. It was her. Chestnut. I neighed in delight. She neighed back. But someone was on her. Linsy!  It screamed. It was Kyileanna! I neighed in delight again. I was so happy. Families again.

Chapter 1 and 2 is story one.

To be couninued!

kyileanna & Cookie
2012-03-16 23:36:31
Anebelle by molly


Intro: This is a story about a dog who got taken from her owner
for no reason and with no warning and then had a long journey
after that.


Prologue:
Anebelle woke up, something was wrong. Where was her food
and water and smiling owner? Where was her bed and toys?
They seemed to have all gone away while nobody was looking.
Anebele was worried about her owner and freinds, where are
they? She wondered out loud, it echoed. "Thats not right,
nothing is right, just plain weird.

sweetiepie4060 & acorn
2012-03-18 20:50:04
THE MAGICAL PONY

PROLOGUE

Emily, a blonde haired girl stared out of her window in her desolate room. Her wish, to get a pony, wasnt an old one. Every night she would pray for one. Her friend Danielle had a welsh cross. And her best friend had a dartmoor pony. But Emily had her heart set on a cross between an arabian thorougbred and a dartmoor pony. Lets hope it comes true.......

CHAPTER 1

' Emily! Get up its time to go to your horse riding lessons!' Emily's Mum called. Reluctantly, Emily tiptoed into the bathroom. She went downstairs for her breakfast and left. At her horse riding lessons, she had a horse called Nugget. He was an english thoroughbred.

CHAPTER 2

When they got there, Emily's teacher, Julie, greeted her with a warm smile as she normally does. Her Mum left, and she started training Nugget.When she was out on the course,she accidentaly fell off of her horse! She forgot to change her shoes, and her left foot was stuck in the stirrup.

CHAPTER 3

Everyone urged their way to her. Calming Nugget down, she dismounted safely. They had to call her Mum immidiately. She was took to hospital, and..... Well find out in the next chapter!

CHAPTER 4

She broke her leg! The nurse put her leg in plaster, and she had crutches. She wasnt aloud to ride a horse for 9 weeks! OOOHHHH! Too bad! That night, when she went for bed, she heard a twinkle outside her bedroom.

CHAPTER 5

Emily ran downstairs to find a pony rumaging in their refrigerator! She called her Mum downstairs, and she was aloud to keep her. At her horse riding lessons, Nugget died of panic, so now she uses her horse for lessons and then brings her home! She called her Lily. When they were downstairs, Lily sniffed Emilys leg, and she repaired it! She was then aloud to do horse riding!

THE END!

Libby horse lover & Epona
2012-03-24 18:59:41
MOONLIGHT RIDING
based on a true story.
By:Pumpkin Pip

The first saturday of the month, we would go for a moonlight ride. I was going to ride minstrel but my little sister said she would show me her furious side if I got him dirty. She was riding him in a competition tomorrow. I decided that I would ride Rosie, a grey mare.

Me and my friend, Lily, tacked up and attatched a torch, first aid kit and snacks to Rosie's saddle. We carefully mounted, said goodbye to our mums and walked down the stoney drive. It was our 3rd moonlight ride of the year! After we were long gone our mums could still make out dark shapes in the night.

We found our usual quiet bridlepath and turned in.

As we entered I asked Lily if we had everything. She said 'yes' and we moved on. We had a gentle trot and then slowed to a walk. We reached the first field and got the tork out. I shone it in front of us and we cantered through the meadow.

After a while, we got to the other end of the field and sqaure halted.
"That was awsome!" Lily said in amazment.

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I still didn't have time to finish MOONLIGHT RIDING.

HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!!
P:S this note isn't something to vote for and I wasn't in the story. I made up Lily and Minstrel.

pumpkin pip & Gemini
2012-03-26 23:28:29
Missing Jewels for Princess Rose

by Pupo




Once upon a time in a fair land of buttercups and lillies there was an old stone castle and and the castle's barn. In the castle there was a beautiful princess. The princess' name was Rose. Rose had a sweet little pony named Pixie. Pixie was nine years old. She looked like she was white, but she was actually a light gray. One day as Princess Rose and Pixie were out on their royal ride, a stranger sneaked into the castle and grabbed a bag of precious rubies and emeralds and quickly ran out of the castle and hid in the woods.
When Princess Rose and Pixie got back from their ride, and Pixie was unsaddled and grommed, Princess Rose went to her room to get some money to buy Pixie a new saddle blanket. When she entered her room she saw a sad state; her room was a mess. Her dresses were on the floor,her safe's door was burnt through, and her bag of jewels was missing. "Ahhh!" she screamed. The guards came running. "Who came into my room and stole my jewels?" she demanded. Nobody answered. Than a small voice answered,"He did,". Princess Rose turned to see the small kitchen boy pointing a trembling hand at Sir Walton's pocket that had Princess Rose's jewels in it! Sir Walton was put in prison for the rest of his life. Pixie and Princess Rose now lead a very happy life in the land of lillies and buttercups.
The End


Pupo & Marble
2012-03-28 03:35:58
The Pony And The Missing Dog By:sherridan333
Chapter:1 The Rescue page 1
Pam Crandal looked around the big barn. There was fresh straw in all stalls and the aisles were swept clean. Her barn chores were done. At last she could brush Lightning and saddle her up for a trail ride. Pam grabbed a currycomb and a grooming brush and left the barn.
Lightning was resting under the sugar maple tree in the middle of the paddock. Her reddish-brown coat was shiny under the morning sun. "Hey, Lightning Pam called. The End chapters 1-10

sherridan333 & Snow White
2012-03-29 23:41:12
MOONLIGHT RIDING
Part 2
By :Pumpkin Pip
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We kicked our ponies on and trotted through the other end of the bridlepath.

Suddenly, a deer jumped out in front of us!
Rosie backed away into Lily's pony.
We walked down the rest of the path(on our ponies).
When we were about to turn onto the road, a plastic bag flew out of the hedge and scared Rosie!
She reared up and threw me off! Not long after she galloped away into the distance...............

Lily had noticed a cut on my leg. I cut it on a sharp rock, deeply...
Lily searched for the first aid kit but remembered that it was attached to Rosie!
She rang my dad and he came right away.

They got me in the car and drove me home.
My dad cleaned the wound, wrapped it up and put me in bed. He asked the local police station if a grey mare had turned up but they said 'no'.

That night I couldn't sleep. I tried but I just couldn't.
So I got up and went outside to see if Rosie had come back.
She hadn't......

Early in the morning the police said an old lady had found A grey mare and thought it was ours.
Dad told her to come right away.

"ROSIE!!!"
"Here you go love," said the old lady.
"Thank you sooo much!"
"Goodbye and have a lovely day." my dad said waving.
I took Rosie in and untacked her, put her stable rug on and said 'I'll be back later'
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That's the end of MOONLIGHT RIDING!
Please vote for me and I hope you liked it.

pumpkin pip & Gemini
2012-03-31 08:30:33
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