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*** January 2012 Story Contest 10 and Under ***
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*** January 2012 Story Contest 10 and Under ***
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| Jane Crandal & JB | 2012-02-11 19:14:45 | | Callie's Escape
By: ivorycowgirl
Username: Ivorycowgirl
Horses Name: Callie
Age 10 , practiclly 11
One day there was a girl named Lily. She always had loved horses, and never thought of disliking them. But terribly her friends thought horses were smelly, weird and plain out dumb. So Lily hadn't talked to them for weeks because of that. Lily had a horse named Callie, she was a brown thoroughbred ex race horse. She admired Callie very, very much. Callie was an old horse , 26 in fact. All of Lily's "friends" diskliked Callie and called her a useless piece of junk. Lily scowled at them when she saw them with anger after that. But Callie was not useless at all in fact, she was an ex race horse, so she was very fast. Lily cantered her every day and was training for the Derby. She had high hopes of winning that ever since she could ride. Lily slowly brushed Callie off and put her tack on. As Lily was approaching the mounting block, she noticed something. Callie seemed different. Ever since she moved to her uncle's farm, Callie missed her old life, but still showed the same gait and friendliness. Lily mounted slowly , she smiled ,
"Your a great horse you know that" she muttered.
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Lily was approaching the jump very slowly at the trot, Callie soared through the air and stuck the landing. Lily suddenly heard a gun shot. Callie started thrashing her fead around nervously.
"Calm down girl, it's ok"
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Callie didn't calm down , soon enough more shots and she was rearing and bucking in the air. Lily desperatly held on for dear life and remained calm. She slowly stroked her horse and the Callie stopped bucking for a split second. Then Callie bolted off at the speed of light. Lily held on and was screaming in her head now. She let go and fell, she couldn't hold on longer. Lily immedietly crashed down on to rocks and had scrapes down her back. She blinked through a fit of tears and dust to see Callie galloping away.
"Wait!" she screamed, but it was too late. Callie was gone.
| ivorycowgirl & Callie | 2012-01-01 19:53:10 | | chapter 3
by michaela8
Dasher is very cute and sweet. I work at the Potter League. That is a place where you can adopt a dog a cat a mouse a ferret a bird a rabbit. Just about aningthing. I help alot! I got 2 dogs adopted and 4 ferrets and a ginea pig. I am 9 years old and I save lives. please call the potter league today. There a pet there waiting for you to get it.
Thank You! And if you vote for I will send you a gift.
Michaela8 | michaela8 & clar | 2012-01-03 23:10:39 | | Lightning's First Jump
SimbaSimba
Age 10
Pam try that jump, said Mrs. Crandal. She was trying to jump over a hurdle. Her pony Lightning was new to jumping and learning the contest course rules. But Lightning got abused before and was learning that being in a bridle was okay especially with Pam's other pony Lightning. They were fostering abused ponies.
The adoption agency said if the horses showed good skills, they would enter them into the horse therapy show. Pam knew her new Lightning would be able to enter. But that would be in six months. Pam thought if only Anna and Lulu were here to see her but it would be impossible the two of their parents were going to visit the Mississippi River. But they were coming back in six months to see the horse show. Pam rode her foster on the trails that day. She thought that she was ready because she didn't pull on the reins anymore. Her mommy lead Lightning on the lead rope. She jumped over logs, streams, and even stopped for a squirrel. She's doing awesome said Pam maybe she will make it to go to the horse show. Maybe she will said Jane Crandal. That night Pam's foster pony got bit by a snake. She whinnies really loud which woke up Lightning. She was very smart so she unlatched her stall to see what happened. Lightning knew what to do she went by Pam's window and nickered a loud cry, Pam knew something was wrong she got up and followed Lightning to the stall. Pam saw the foster horse. It needed help right away. She called her dad and her dad gave her anti-poison shots. He said she would get better tomorrow. 4 months later, Pam entered the contest she won with 0 faults and 9 out of 9 right. Lightning the foster one got a home that a little girl adopted because she saw how lonesome she looked in the ring to make the parents feel better though the foster family let her go for 100 instead of 300.
| simbasimba & Dove | 2012-01-05 01:49:21 | | Ice's memories
annamarie208
age 10
Once there was a girl named Anna, She had brown hair and green eyes, one day she went to feed her pony Ice. Her mom said she put the horse in the pasture that morning. Anna went out and didn't see Ice anywhere! She looked everywhere where she could be. After about 45 minutes looking in the forest she heard a faint neigh, "Ice?" she said. She heard another neigh.
She followed where the neighing came from, and when she found ice she couldnt believe her eyes, there were scars all over Ice and was in a huge mud puddle and was stuck. Anna called the vet "Hello" Anna said. "Hi what do you need" said the vet. "My horse is all scratched up and and shes stuck in a mud hole" Anna said. "Woah what again slow down" said the vet.
Anna repeated it. "OK whats your name" said the vet.
"Anna" said Anna. "OK where are you at" said the vet.
"I'm at ponywood forest" said Anna.
"Ok I'm coming"
Few minutes later Anna heard a faint sound of a car. She looked behind her and saw a vet's car. "Thank God" Anna said under her breath.
The vet came over "Sorry it took so long sombody's cat needed a shot"
"Its ok" said Anna.
A few hours later the vet noticed that the horse was breathing hard and was shaking. "We me have to put her down" said the vet
"but b-" The vet cut her off, "You want whats best for her right?"
"y-y-yes"
"Then I'm gonna' have to put Ice to sleep"
Anna started crying, looked away and dried her tears.
"Ok Dr." Anna said.
After the vet got her out of the mud hole and washed her off she horse was lying on the ground on its side.
Anna hugged Ice and whispered "Bye, Ice I'll miss you" and she started crying again. She buryed her face in her mane. "OK, Anna i have to put her to sleep now." Anna looked away and muttered an "OK."
Anna looked in to Ice's loving, confused and bold eyes for the last time, they seemed to say "Why am I here? Who is this person taking the weird sharp thing from the bag?"
The vet took the needle and put it in Ice's fore leg Ice whinnyed with pain.
Anna cryed.
She remembered all the good times she had with Ice, like when she was riding wuth Ice and she felt like they were flying, and when Ice was 6 months old the filly came over and head butted Anna sweetly and softly.
A few months later Anna and her mom buried Ice under the willow tree in the pasture she used to love so much.
"Love you Ice." Anna said crying as they buried her.
The End
| annamarie208 & Ice | 2012-01-12 15:53:25 | | BHF(Best Horse Friends)
By:BellaHorse10
1.The Phone Call
*I was drinking my orange juice when my granny called me to go for a walk,i jumped up and the first thing i asked was:*"Are you gonna call the horse lady person,woman,thing?""You mean Die?""Yes Yes her!!!!""When we get back"*I but on my shoes and the whole walk i was asking questions*"Am i gonna trot?Whats shes gonna teach me?I hope i ride Montana!Will i?!?!"*she answered all,when we got back home i bugged her*"call her!Call her!Call her!!!"*she finally called her and said i could come on Tuesday*"Yes!!!!!im so exited!!!!""Im so exited for you my darling!"
*i i couldn't sleep Monday night at all,i just tried closing my eyes,questions rushed through my head,like what horse will i ride?Ive been to the stable before,Will i freak out?Morning came and i woke up at 6:00 in the morning,my 2 year old brother Calum said as soon as he say me*Bedda!!!!!""Hey Cally!!Is bedda gonna go see horseys?""Yeah!Bedda go see horsey!i come?""I wish you come but you have school!gonna see friends too!ill tell you all about it!"*i said hi to my mom*"What should i wear?i dont have real riding clothes..."*i put on my grey leggings and a black polo,i waved bye to cally and we drove to the stable,i sat quiet in the back seat the whole way,i was about to explode!*"IM SO EXITED!!!!"*i shouted,we got there and the stable hand said that she was teaching a lesson,i walked to through the stable and walked to the ring,i watched 2 gorgeous horse canter,Di said i was riding a horse named Rambler,i looked for her and i saw an oldish black polo horse with 1 eye*"Hi girl,"
Part 2
*i patted her and she was so soft,my mom said the same,Di came in and asked if i wanted to groom her*"sure!!!"*i got a curry come and started grooming her,my granny kinda took over and then Di tacked her up for me,i got to lead her out and then i mounted perfectly,Di helped a little,then i walked i she asked if i have ever trotted,i said no but then i remembered ounce i cantered by mistake,she let me walk to each corner,she told me how to prepare to trot,then she got a lunging whip and a long lead rope,i kicked her and she started trotting,she told me to go up and down,i kept saying up down up down in my head,for the rest of the lesson i was so happy,i got to carry her bridle back to the tack room,i looked for Rambler,i put it on the hook and looked at a western saddle,i walked back to the stall and say a huge white horse,i forgot what his name was but he was gorgeous!i patted Rambler and thought id never see her again because i was going away soon,i hugged her then we left,i went to my grannies house after instead of going straight home,after awhile i went home*
*i woke up early again and went to a second lesson,i had improved on trotting a lot,i kissed Rambler and hugged her,she nickered happily,i wiped a tear of my face,Di saw that and said i could stay and do a stable lesson*"really!yay!!"*i got to groom her and do everything!i watched her play in the pasture with some other horses,she trotted to me and i hugged her,i drew some pictures of her and she liked one*eww!!"*i giggled*silly girl!"*i patted her*
part 3 coming soon also :) hope you like it!! | BellaHorse10 & Thunder | 2012-01-18 14:37:57 | | DIARY OF A HORSE GIRL
Hi. My name is Josephine. My Mum bought me this diary. Do not think im weird. I will tell you the story of me when i went to Oxford riding school. It is funny. When i went, my Mum told me i was too little, and she could imagine me falling off a horse. Baloney! '' Joe, listen! If you fall off a horse, i will be angry. Ride a pony.'' She told her. '' Yes Mum.'' I | Libby horse lover & Epona | 2012-01-20 19:14:56 | | Josie ran inside dipping a rag in the water Ellie was boiling for supper she ran back to the barn the leaves crunched under her feet as the turned to the barn she walked in his stall rubbing the warm rag in circles all across his shoulders and back it seemed to calm him enough she ran inside knowing that Amelia would help she was making the twins beds as she walked in "Amelia you have to help" she said "There is somthing wrong with slaughter" Amelia frowned and said "You need to calm down that isn't even your horse" then Josie rembered that this whole time she was thinking my horse my horse my horse when it wasn't even close to being hers in her head she was pinching herself for being so selfish "Okay" Amelia said "Ill check it out" she wandered outside Amelia walked in the barn and rubbed her hands down slaughters back Amelia laughed out loud "Sweetie he just started eating he was trying to digest and you know he doesn't like being watched eating" Josie felt angery at herself again "I better be helping make lunch" Josie stammered and ran inside she pulled out the salted bacon and rinced out some of the salt she started to heat up the stove putting a simple iron skillet on it she took a little butter and put it on it melted quickly putting the bacon on she tryed to look busyshe fixed her skirt and wandered upstairs she was so mixed up. | mistymyhorse & Dixes Rowdy Misty | 2012-01-20 23:53:41 | | Hi my name is Stasiamay.I have a horse named Wishper.That is my story. | stasiamay & Whisper | 2012-01-21 03:15:59 | | the story of the unicorn named fredferd chapter one :once apon a time their was a unicorn named fredferd.fredferd was a magic unicorn and one day a evil witch took away his magic and his horn. so he set off to fined his horn and magic and on the way to fined the evil witch he met a cretere that was called skuwigl and finely they found his horn and magic and went home.THE END | twilit & Monty | 2012-01-21 18:46:54 | |
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